this is the text I used for an add on several german babysitting platforms.
Can anybody help me improve the text? Somehow it doesn't seem to be successful.
With our 5-year-old, possibly autistic daughter, we are working on a "Son-Rise Program" and are urgently looking for more volunteers. There is no special training required, just the pleasure to get involved with the child and to play enthusiastically. Any other training will be provided!
The "Son-Rise Program" was awarded best Autism Treatment in America last year - but is still largely unknown in Germany.
For you, there is the extraordinary opportunity to be part of it, to change the life of this little girl. - In return, you may find that this process also will not leave you untouched.
Desirable would be 2 hours, 2 to 3 times per week over a period of at least 6 months.
Two people asked what they would be supposed to do. And this was my answer:
I am glad for your interest!
We are looking for volunteers to play with our daughter about 2 to 3 times per week for 2 hours . Essentially, it's about getting involved in playing with a non-judgmental and optimistic attitude. When the relationship between the child and the volunteer has grown, the next step is to offer variations, to initiate something new.
And then I never herd from them again.
There are so many students advertizing on those platforms and I sent it to dozens of them.
Can anyone give me a clue, whether there's something wrong with the text?
Does someone have an idea why hardly anybody responded?
Many thanks in advance!